Ch. 1 Strip 22

posted 18 Mar 2014


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18 Mar 2014

Marion-999

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lalalala~ too much dialogues? a little background story.... chan chan chaaan!

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18 Mar 2014

piccolodian

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I know, I know. The explanation doesn't do a well enough job justifying the marriage between Lez and Don. BUT, fear not, later on a better explanation will be provided.

Also, a view of what happened after Lez's pregnancy.

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19 Mar 2014

skyangel

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This was a lot to digest in one go and I did get a bit confused as to which speech bubbles came next but I realise it was a tough page to lay out and you've made a nice job of getting the art in there Marion cos I'd have struggled with this! I know how you feel too Piccles as I tend to write so much at times it's a real wrench trying to decide if I should spread it over more pages or just edit it down. This isn't critique btw, I just feel your pain here!lol

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19 Mar 2014

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@skyangel: Im so glad you understand! This page is probably the one that has given me the most trouble out of all of them. It's difficult to have so much to explain and so little space >.<

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I did a page where Stacey was relating part of her life story while Sarah slept beside her on the bed, and I thought if I spread it over 2-3 pages it would be tedious for both me and the readers so I just went for one nice piccy and a wall of text!lol
I still cringe when I go back to it but like you I felt it read better as one set page and it does save the reader having to flick back and forth between the updates. What I love about this comic is the enthusiasm that oozes from it all the time in both art and writing. You always have something to say and I always feel the personal emotions within it whether it's in the fun pages or the more serious ones.

*Just realised I wasn't logged in. If this was the Duck I'd have lost it doing that!*

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Honestly a beautiful page, and seriously you are dealing with problems that, well a lot of straight and homosexual romantic stories would rather not mess with, and you guys do it so well. Really your guys are amazing keep it up:D

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